2025年2月22日の授業レポート「小説の冒頭から面白い出だしを学ぼう!」「ネタ見せ」

授業レポート&ライブレポート

こんにちは。大阪お笑い塾の代表の高田豪です。

寒い日が続いておりますが、お変わりないでしょうか?

3月からは急に温かくなるようなので、みなさん体調管理にお気をつけくださいね。

本日の午前にはビギナーコースの授業が行われました。レポートはこちらからご覧いただけます▼

小説の冒頭から「面白い出だし」を学ぼう!

今回は小説の冒頭で「面白い!」と評価の高いものをみなさんで分析しました。

最も有名な小説の冒頭といえば

夏目漱石の「吾輩は猫である。名前はまだ無い 」

川端康成の「国境の長いトンネルを抜けると雪国であった」

このふたつでしょう。

「吾輩は猫である。名前はまだ無い 」には「猫なのにしゃべるんかい! と思いました」というご意見が。確かにしれっと猫がしゃべっている冒頭は、思わずツッコミを入れたくなります。

川端康成の「国境の長いトンネルを抜けると雪国であった」には「トンネルが境界線の役割をはたしており、その向こうに新しい世界が開けていたという解放感がある」というご意見が述べられました。

一文でここまで伝えて、人をワクワクさせられるとは「さすがは文豪!」と言わざるをえません。

小説もお笑いのネタも、冒頭で面白そうと思ってもらわなければすぐに離脱されます。

面白い冒頭は

  • すでに何か動き出している
  • 全てを説明していないものの、一部気になる情報を具体的に言っている
  • 気づけばツッコミを入れている

といった興味を引く仕掛けがあります。

裏を返せば、退屈な冒頭は上記のような仕掛けが皆無なのです。

冒頭のツカミは、インパクトを残すだけでなく全体の一部を表すパーツになっているのが理想的。後半で冒頭の伏線を回収する流れになっていれば、後半に「おお、そう紐づいていたのか!」という驚きとカタルシスがありますね。

ナレーター、パフォーマーに分かれてワーク

2人1組にわかれてワークをしていただきました。

こちらは打ち合わせの一場面▼

小説の朗読のように、片方はナレーター役。もうひとりはパフォーマー役に。

「ある人間の一日の生活を表現する」という縛りで実演していただきました。

  • 「〇〇の一日は××で始まる」でスタート
  • 「〇〇の一日はこうして終わるのであった」が締め

スタートと締め方は固定で、あとは自由に展開していただきます。

とりわけ面白かったコンビをピックアップいたしました。


犬飼さんと天ぷらさんは、おじさん天ぷらさんの一日を描写。

天ぷらさんが、所せましと暴れ回ります。

こちらの写真では落ち着いた顔をされていますが、このあと、スイッチオンになりいろいろな表情が披露されました。

壁際に立ち朗読する犬飼さんは、いつもブレない姿勢で堂々としておられます。


ケンさん(写真左)となすぴーは、ケンさんのモーニングシャワーからスタート。

途中でストレッチをする際に、Y字バランスを試みるもののケンさんの体が硬すぎて「イタタタタ…」となる場面で笑いが起こっていました。

読まれた内容とのギャップが出ると、それがボケになりやすいですね。


極楽さんとシアリスの畠山さんは、極楽さんの数学教師としての一日を描写。

素数を愛する極楽さんの一日の最後は、確率を知り尽くした証明として「パチンコで大勝ちを狙う」というまさかの展開…。

役柄もマッチしており「素晴らしい出来!」という絶賛の声が上がりました!

ネタ見せの時間

3/1(土)に第28回OSAKAお笑い寄席が「ライブ喫茶亀」で開催されます。

👆こちらは芥子壺さんが作ってくださったチラシです

今日は、3/1のライブ前の最後のネタ見せ。たくさんのネタが披露されました!


鉄道芸人しろみずさんは、自作ののぼりを持って現れました。

ちなみにこちらののぼりは、2,000円弱とリーズナブルな価格で作れるそうです。

前回披露した「踊る大捜査線」に絡めた鉄道ネタだったのですが、要点が絞られかなり見やすくなっていました。

3/1は、のぼりとともにしろみずさんが舞台に参上するかもしれません。


なすぴーは、ももたろうの絵本にツッコミを入れるというネタ。

常識の視点から、非常識な内容にツッコミを入れるというやり方が見やすいです。

なすぴーが持っておられる絵本は、実際にお子さんへ読み聞かせをする際に、用いたものだそうです。


芥子壺さんは、アイテムを使ったネタを披露してくれました。

マリリン・モンローが登場するネタを2分ほどでサクっと見やすい形にまとめてくれました。

今後、マリリン・モンローがさらにパワーアップする可能性もあるそうなので、そちらも楽しみですね!


オジーサンズは、テッサンがお休みのため代理のケンさんがお手伝い。

とてもわかりやすいネタで、序盤にしっかり笑いをとれそうな箇所がいくつもあります。

ツッコミをもう少し短くできそうなところがありますので、リズムを意識して言葉をスリムにすればさらによくなるでしょう。


シアリスは、最初に披露した際には5分ほどあったネタを3分半に短縮。

冗長なところがカットできたので、テンポがよくなりボケも際立つようになりました。

毎回少しずつ改善していくのがシアリスのスタイル。一回ごとに着実にネタの質が上がっています!


たかたかやまは、前回披露してくれたコントをブラッシュアップ。

今回は、天ぷらさんがアドリブを挟むなど遊び心もありました。

高橋さんのリアクション次第で、お客さんの気持ちを誘導できるところがあるので、リアクションの種類を増やすとさらに良くなりそうです。


3/1(土)の第28回OSAKAお笑い寄席は、13時45分開場で14時開演。前売り、当日ともに500円。

今回は、ビギナーコースの人たちが初めてお笑い寄席に出演されます。

コーナーは「ケンさんのお悩み解決」。ケンさんのお悩みに、なすぴー、芥子壺さん、たくまさん(サンズ)がアドバイスを送ります。

今回も必ず盛り上がることでしょう!

天気予報を見ると日和も良さそうなので、ぜひお越しいただけると嬉しいです。

最後まで読んでいただいて、ありがとうございました!!

高田豪(大阪お笑い塾・代表)

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